Ed, you have made some very good suggestions for self editing. I too believe setting a work aside for a period of time is a great step. When reread it's amazing how many changes one can make to the copy. Another trick for self editing that works great is to read the copy outloud to yourself, or preferably to another person. If in ordinary speaking it is awkward then it will read that way and needs refining.

Though I have been somewhat critical of the editorial content of the DGJ, my hopes have been to improve what is already a great publication.

John McCain is my war hero.